There is not really much I can say that will make my writing seem more than it is. I feel my words here do not have the same sting as what I do each and every day in my novels. That is where the true effect of my writing comes forth. Every word I write provides more and more meaning to my novels and continues to build on the thought process I use to write. I do not find any difficulty in what I do these days, because I am so used to the pressure of forcing myself to write, that I have managed to ingrain my standards into everything I do. Let me hope I can keep it up.
The report from last week is definitely located by clicking the following link: Crow: Breaking and Entering
- What I Did
For today, Crow was largely focused on Ashley’s battle with not only Crow but herself as she continues to contemplate what the best thing in her life would be. Sure, it is quite a different style to what I have portrayed in the past, but that is the beauty of how Crow should work. Crow works because of the mishmash of content forming a coherent story.
The biggest and most difficult part for today was Ashley looking at the file Crow Enterprises keeps on her. It shows her that no matter what she thinks she might do, Crow are always a step ahead of her and that drives up the tension, because she now fights with the fact she is not as good as she believes herself to be.
Of course, doubt is not something to stop Ashley and she retains her prowess and knowledge as she makes her escape from the clutches of Crow Enterprises Security. Yet even then, she is not safe. Not while she is in possession of her mobile phone and that is the realisation I am building toward.
- Today’s Best Work
The report Crow Enterprises keeps on Ashley is a prime example of how methodical I can write and how much I retain in my brain, because I did not need to look back over what I have written for any part of this.
Person of Interest: Ashley Hudson
Priority: Immediate Threat – Use of Force Authorized.
I cocked my head and wondered what they knew about me. I opened the file and a myriad of data files opened up, complete with a recent photograph of me. My heart skipped a beat and I wasted no time in reading the contents of the file.
Date of Birth: February 26, 2000 (24 years old)
Sex: She identifies as a Female but her behaviour is very masculine.
Sexuality: All circumstances regarding what fields agents know about Ms. Hudson point to her preferring the company of females. Could be bisexual, but more than like to be lesbian.
Nationality: American
Born: Huntsville, Alabama
Education: No Higher Education statistics recorded. Attached is a copy of Ms. Hudson’s results from her Senior year of schooling.
History:
- Hudson seems to come from a tumultuous childhood. Her father in prison for rape and abuse yet no sign of trauma present in Ms. Hudson.
- Evidence suggests she was a perpetrator alongside her father in some of these acts, given her predisposition to violent sexual acts with female partners.
- Female agents should take care when approaching her, as she is quite charismatic when it comes to romantic behavior.
- Purpose in San Diego not quite known. Preliminary evidence suggests she offers Private Investigate services.
- Threat level assigned as periphery threat. Assigned Agent #189-ES to watch target.
- Person of Interest Isabelle Ramirez spotted outside Ms. Hudson’s place of residence. Agent #189-ES confirms presence inside house.
- Threat level assigned as Moderate Threat. Suggesting Agent #189-ES go forward with preliminary offer.
- Hudson engaged in vicious sexual activities with Agent #189-ES. No damage reported. Call made to Agent #144-FG.
- Hudson collected forged files from Agent #144-FG. Tracking beacon and bug confirmed as operational.
- Hudson seen undertaking firearms training at local gun club. Recommending caution. Ms. Hudson observed to be proficient with firearms.
- Agent #189-ES seeking assistance from Agent #188-HS. Ms. Hudson observed attending party. Agent #188-HS spotted target speaking with unknown party – New Person of Interest
- Hudson made phone call to Agent #189-ES. Seemed to be aware of a plot against her.
- Vehicles belonging to Agent #189-ES blown up by Ms. Hudson.
- Threat level raised to Immediate Threat. Authorization cleared to use force to subdue target.
- Hudson called and identified as at her apartment. Agents report no sign of her. Local emergency services force retreat from area.
- Forged files missing when Agents move back in; Ms. Hudson presence confirmed but missing.
- Agent sent to Isabelle Ramirez property. Found empty and with sets of clothes missing. Likely Ms. Hudson absconded with her.
- Hudson confirmed at Sophia Grant property; Agents #007-SS, #188-HS and #189-ES all contact Ms. Hudson in various ways.
- Offers soundly rejected but letter from Agent #188-HS confirmed missing.
- Call from Ms. Hudson to Agent #188-HS made. Agent #188-HS reports that Ms. Hudson grapples with the idea of accepting offer. Recommended to pursue further offers.
- Hudson no longer on radar. Probable cause is that she utilizes an unknown safehouse. Agent search teams scouring San Diego area.
- Hudson identified at hardware store purchasing climbing supplies.
- Agents dispatched to Crow Enterprises Offices in San Diego, California. Probable that Ms. Hudson present in location due to alarm in roof door tripped.
- Hudson confirmed inside Crow Enterprises Offices. Allowed her access to certain files including this one.
- END HISTORY
Recommended Course of Action: Acquire for Crow Enterprises Agent forces.
- How Productive I Felt I Was
While I could not continue the dialogue free writing this week, I still kept it to a bare minimum, though the monologues are among my larger ones, but that is okay. It shows I am making progress with my writing style. My chapters become longer, my paragraphs far more descriptive and my dialogue reveals a lot more while also retaining the characteristics of the speaker. Overall, I am ecstatic about anything I write.
- What I Intend To Write Next Week
Next week will wrap up the current chapter I am working on and enable me to change back to Isabelle’s perspective so we can get her thoughts on what happened while Ashley was out breaking the law. It is fun to write with two perspectives, but also extraordinarily difficult to do right. I feel I am doing it right.
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